Old 08-29-2010, 08:16 PM   #1
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Default New Song, Feedback Please

Heres a new one using Reaper and IK Multimedia Metal software. Anyways, feedback is appreciated, Thanks for listening.



Heres the Link: http://soundclick.com/share?songid=9585858

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Old 08-30-2010, 04:08 AM   #2
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hey,

some nice sounds you got there! There are some issues, though (I hope you don't mind me being honest. Everything else is not gonna be of use for you).

First, I hear some timing issues: you partially tend to play to fast and run away, like in the muted clean part, and especially when the high gain part begins.
The drums are too dry, I'd give them more room. Some more changement/varation would be good, too. Keep on! Ah, and what about the bass. Is there any? :-)

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Old 08-31-2010, 12:23 AM   #3
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Hi Mojo, No offense taken. Thank you for your honesty. The guitars do sound abit out of time from the drums (In the process of redoing them). But I did what you suggested and eq'd the drums alittle, to make them less dry sounding, and theres no bass, Im gonna have to borrow one.

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Old 08-31-2010, 06:48 AM   #4
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kontakt player has some usable bass sounds. it's freeware, too.
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